Tuesday, May 28, 2013

7th grade ELO Revision Deadlines- June 14th


As many of your know, Mr. Gates and the English teachers have stressed with importance of completing all ELOs this year. In addition:

Principal Gates is requiring all students to receive an 80% mastery grade on ELO 1-8 this year. If a student doesn't receive an 80% or higher they will go to summer school until they complete them. 


Therefore, that is what we will be working on this marking period to give students a chance to revise and complete the ELO projects. Once a student recieves a 80% or higher that grade will be put into Jupiter grades again. Students who already received an 80% or higher will not have to do it again, however, their final grade will be put into this marking period again.


Below you will find the essay tasks for ELOs 1-8 for the 7th grade. Students are to complete each essay and receive an 80% or higher of each essay. Tutorials are also being held on Tuesday and Thursday for extra help.

Important deadlines: 


ELO 1-3 is due May 28th

ELO 4-8 are due June 14th

**On June 14th every student must have a completed ELO Student portfolio.

7th grade ELOs Essay Prompts:


ELO 1- Personal Narrative



Write a personal narrative describing your relationship with a family member or guardian.  Select one memory you share with that person. In your personal narrative you will tell your personal, point-of-view of what happened. You will use descriptive language that describes the intricacies of dealing with your family member or guardian.

o   Introduction- Engage your audience with a hook.  Then orient the reader by describing the setting and introducing the characters. Also explain any background information necessary to understand the memory.
o   Paragraph 1 – Describe the first thing that happened.
o   Paragraph 2 – Describe the next thing that happened.
o   Paragraph 3 – Discuss the resolution/ ending.
o   Conclusion- Explain what you learn from having a relationship with this person.

·      Personal Narrative must describe and show the intricacies between you and someone else.
·      Personal Narrative must include dialogue and inner thinking.
·      Personal Narrative needs to have correct grammar, organization, and spelling. 

ELO 2- Compare and Contrast Essay


          Compose a compare and contrast essay analyzing different types of relationships in a story and form an opinion about healthy bonds.



·       Your essay will adhere to the following structure:

o   Introductory Paragraph- Introduce both literary works. State your thesis statement explaining what you will  prove in your essay with similarities, differences, or both.
o   Body Paragraph 1 – State one similarity or one difference between both literary works.
          Support your thesis with clear reasons and relevant 
          evidence within the text.                                           
o   Body Paragraph 2-State second similarity or difference between both literary works.
           Support your thesis with clear reasons and relevant
           evidence within the text                                            
o   Conclusion-Provide a concluding statement or summary rephrasing your thesis.

·      Correct grammar, organization, and spelling are required.

ELO 3- Thematic Essay on House on Mango Street



In The House On Mango Street, Sandra Cisneros explores many themes through the experiences of the main character, Esperenza. Complete the following thematic essay, using details from the text that answer the two essential questions above.
           


·       Your essay will adhere to the following structure:

Introduction paragraph- Introduce the essay by describing the chosen theme and how it relates to the essential questions.

Body Paragraph 1, 2, and 3- supports your thesis statement with textual evidence from your graphic organizer.

Conclusion paragraph-  conclude your essay by explaining what the author (Sandra Cisneros) hoped the reader to learn through the chosen theme and explain if she is successful or unsuccessful in this and how it answers the essential questions


·      Paper must have correct grammar, organization, and spelling.

ELO 1-3 is due May 28th

ELO 4- Poetry of Discovery

Evaluate a poem that deals with an aspect of discovery either the discovery of yourself or something in society.
           
 Your essay will adhere to the following structure:

Introduction paragraph- Introduce the poem by summarizing the contents of the poem and stating the discovery.  State what the poet’s message is or what can be learned about what the poem is discovering.
Body Paragraphs - Explain the poet’s message using textual evidence from the poem.  Explain the poetic devices used to help the author convey their message.  Critique the effectiveness of the poems ability to explain or depict the discovery.
Conclusion paragraph- Restate your thesis and what the reader should learn. Explain the thoughts or philosophy that we should apply to our lives.
·      Paper must have correct grammar, organization, and spelling.


ELO 5- Feature Article on Inventions



Compose a feature article about an invention   impacted   culture and/or history           

Your feature article will adhere to the following structure:

Layout:  Your article will follow the format of a newspaper article.  It will be written in   columns and have a title and subheading.  It should also be typed in Times New Roman 12 point font.

Sources: You should find at least three different sources and use at least two of them.

Introduction paragraph- Introduce the invention by sharing some background information about the invention and purpose. State in your thesis the impact this invention has had on culture or history.
Body Paragraphs - Explain why the invention was needed, how it was developed (steps taken to patent the invention)
Conclusion paragraph- Restate your thesis and what the reader should learn. Explain the impact of the invention has had on culture and history. Finally, explain the action the reader should take.
Works Cited Page: Following MLA format
Paper must have correct grammar, organization, and spelling. 

ELO 6- Persuasive Letter to Mr. Gates on a chosen field trip



Students will write a persuasive letter to Mr. Gates explaining what the 7th graders should do for their next field trip.   Students must give reasons why there selected choice would be a good trip and address at least one counter argument.             


Your essay must:

ü Include background information about the trip
ü Explanation why the trip would be successful and reasons for going to this location
ü Address at least one counter argument

·      Paper must have correct grammar, organization, and spelling. 

ELO 7- Prediction Essay for ELA exam 


Based on your performance thus far this school year in ELA, compose an essay predicting your outcome on the NYS ELA exam.

Your essay must:

ü follow one of the following structures: compare/contrast, problem/solution, or persuasive
ü include an introduction  with a clear thesis
ü explain why you would earn that score on the state exam using specific statistical evidence and examples (data)
ü explain how you have grown as a reader and/or writer
ü conclude by explaining the purpose of reflection and state a call to action
ü have correct grammar, organization, and spelling

ELO 8- Feature Article on a Career


Apply the research model and present information that examines a career.
Your feature article will adhere to the following structure:

Layout:  Your article will follow the format of a newspaper article.  It will be written in   columns and have a title and subheading.  It should also be typed in Times New Roman 12 point font.

Sources: You must cite your sources (author or publisher).

Section 1 Introduction paragraph (A) - Good writers of feature articles know that readers come with all levels of understanding of the topic being written about.  As such, you must INTRODUCE the career you are focusing on in a way that allows a person with limited knowledge enough understanding to last the whole article.  Your introduction should include…
  1. A hook that intrigues your reader. 
  2. An overview of the career you have chosen. 
  3. The hours someone in this career works.
  4. The salary and benefits they may expect to earn in the career.

Section 2:   Body Paragraph 1 The Right Fit
Now that you have hooked you reader into your article, let them know what kind of person would do well in the career you are writing about.  This section should include…
1.     The amount (and type) of education one should have to obtain this career.
2.     The character traits someone must have in order to do well.
3.     The skills someone needs to excel in this career.
4.     An example of a typical day for someone with that job

Section 3: Body Paragraph 2 and 3 Transference of Skills
All careers have skill sets that can be transferred to a related field.  In this section of the featured article, you will describe…
1.     Likelihood that one could get into the career you chose to write about. 
2.     Other careers someone with the same education and skills could obtain within the same field.
3.     Non-traditional ways someone could use the skills and the career they would have.   

Section 4:  Conclusion
Your reader has come to the end of your article, now you have to give them the tools necessary to continue exploring this career.  Your conclusion should include…
  1. Revisit the points you introduced in the beginning of your article.
  2. High schools, colleges, universities, or other post-secondary programs that develop skills necessary for the career.
  3. Actions the reader can take if they are still interested in the career you presented. 

Additional Features
To add interest to your article, you must choose one of the following and include where appropriate…
  1. Interview and quotations from someone in the career you are writing about.
  2. A photo with a caption.
  3. A graph that reflects research or survey.

Works Cited Page: Following MLA format

ELO 4-8 are due June 14th

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